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Reader P.O.V.:

(Y/n) was walking in the flower fields near Mr. Austria House under the beautiful moon. The little Italian girl was making a flower crown out of petunias and lilies. She remembered how she would always make these with Italy and give one just like this to Holy Rome. You would always giggle at his reactions every time he's embarrassed when he puts them on. One day, he was packing up for war.


You wander the hallways after you secretly got a glass of water. Suddenly, you found Holy Rome packing for some reason. Being really curious, you got to him while he was packing his clothing in his room.

*knock knock* *opens door* "Holy Rome? What are you doing?"

Holy Rome's P.O.V.:

I was shocked when (Y/n) stepped into the door. I couldn't hide the truth. Not to someone like her. I guess I had to tell her now, or break hearts later. 

"I'm...going (Y/n)." "Where Holy Rome? *gasp* Are you going on vacation?" "No! I-" "Did you pack my flower crown?"

I remembered. She made a flower crown with Italy one time.

"Oh yeah! That's what I was about to get. Right now in fact!"

I ran to get the flower crown I left on the drawer, kinda withered but still pretty.

"Well I better put it with the others now."

I was about to put it away, until (y/n) grabbed my wrist.

Reader's P.O.V.:

I saw the flower crown withered. Holy Rome was about to put it away, but I stopped him by touching his wrist and holding it before I spoke. 

"Holy Rome. Wait a second, Okay?" He replied with 'okay' and I took off my white bonnet. I unfolded it, took the flower crown and placed it in the middle of the fabric, therefore wrapping it gently and sealed it by tying it together.

"There, that's much better." "But why did you do that." "Things like this might wither quicker than you think. If you try and find it again, it might be gone. that's why I tied it, so it won't get lost of be gone forever. Like a coffin for a corpse, the body can be sealed, but the soul will go on."

I gave Holy Rome the flower crown within the bonnet.

"Either way, You will remember me. Right?"

That was all I said before kissing his cheek and saying "Goodnight Holy Rome, I love you."

Flashback ends:

You stared at the sky, thinking about him. He was gone for years, yet you knew he would leave you like that. You stared at the sky, and sang,

Come out moon
Come out wishing star
Come out
Come out
Wherever you are

You started to shiver since it was so cold. Yet you still sang.

I’m out here in the dark
All alone and wide awake
Come and find me
I’m empty and I’m cold 
And my heart's about to break 
Come and find me

I need you to come here and find me
Cause without you I’m totally lost
I've hung a wish on every star
It hasn’t done much good so far 
I can only dream of you
Wherever you are

You started crying. Soon then, Italy came and saw you and was about to make you feel better until you sang a little more.

I’ll hear you laugh
I’ll see you smile
I’ll be with you just for a while

But when the morning comes
And the sun begins to rise
I will lose you

Italy soon got beside you and sang with you, as if performing a duet.

(I=Italy and U=Reader, which is you & IU=Both)

I:Because it’s just a dream
  When I open up my eyes
  I will lose you

IU:I use to believe in forever
    But forever is to good to be true
    I've hung a wish on every star
    It hasn’t done much good so far 
    I don’t know what else to do
    Except to try to dream of you
    And wonder if you are dreaming too
   Wherever you are

   Wherever you are 
Soon enough, you started crying, with Italy trying to make you feel better.

"There-a there (y/n), Holy Rome will come back soon." You looked at Italy in concern. "How did you know?" "I can tell from how sad you are. It's okay (y/n)."

Suddenly, a shooting star appeared in the sky, and that gave Italy an idea. "Hey, why don't you make a wish on a star? Maybe that would help!" 

You nodded in agreement. You look up at the sky, with tears in your eyes.

"I wish for Holy Rome to come home,I wish for Holy Rome to come home,"

You were silent until you shouted,


Couple of years later:

You woke up from your sleep. You were the country of (C/n) and was an ally of the Axis. You were in your bedroom beside Germany's so you were kind of nervous to yell or something like that. You soon got out of bed and dressed into your military clothes. You were about to go outside, until you checked the time.

6:59 a.m.

'Germany must be awake by now, I better check on him.' you thought. But before you got the chance to open the door,  Germany opened the door with so much force, it slammed you into the wall.

"(Y/n)! Vhere are you?! It's time vor training!" You tried to speak, but the door was still in your face. "Vhat's zhat?" He closed the door to reveal you, unconscious. You fell to the floor.

After a few hours, you woken up to find yourself in Germany's arms. "W-What h-happened?" You said as you were waking up. Germany looked at you with his stern blue eyes. "Oh, your avake Frau. Vell, I accidentally hit vou vith ze door und vou vent unconcious. Entschuldigung" He said. "It's okay, no need to apologize Germany." 

Soon enough, Germany kissed you on the cheek, as you soon started to blush. "Uh Germany?" "Listen, (y/n). I just wanted to tell you, Ich liebe dich." You blushed a little more. "A-Anche io ti amo, in Germania."

Germany suddenly kissed you full on the lips, gentle yet passionate. You kissed back in the thought of him being by your side, like you thought Holy Rome might have thought. Germany glided his tongue onto your lower lip, as a sign of entrance. You gladly accepted it, as your tongues were fighting for dominance. Germany soon conquered your little pink tongue and started exploring every inch of the luscious domain.

Soon enough, you two stopped and separated for air. "You know, I cancelled training for today." Germany said to fill the silence. "Y-You did?" you said kind of thinking of eating delicious pasta today. "Ja, but I vas zinking." "Si?" Germany soon cleared his throat, took your hand, and said,

'How Vould you like to train in Bed?'

Extended Ending:

You soon woke up, Germany still sleeping from... that. You changed your clothes or whatever and try to wake up Germany, although you didn't cause you might not know what to say when he wakes up. As you passed by Germany's room, the door was open, so something caught you eye. A white little hankerchief that wrapped up, well, I think you know what it is. You held it gently, shedding some tears while so. Soon enough, Germany came in, thankfully he had a towel to cover it up. He walked up to you as you put the little gift down, shivering since you were afraid of what he might say, mostly because he was still naked. He was just getting his clothes, but before you could walk out like nothing happened, 

"Vait (y/n)," he said, as you stayed put, frozen in fear. "I vould like to ask you something." You turned your head like a haunted stone statue. Germany walked up to you and said, "Vould you like to go on a date vith me?"

You melted at the expression he made, his flustered little face kinda reminded you of Holy Rome. As you smiled at him, you turned to him, hugging him at the moment. "Si~!"

Some things never change.

Meanwhile, Japan and Italy were looking at you from the staircase (You guys were on a two-story house so yeah):

"Ve~ Sorella and Germany are so right for each other~!" Italy said. "Can't Germany at reast put on some crothes, rhy does he have to be nude?" said Japan, completely(or should I say, compretery) uncomfortable.
Hey, sorry for not writing fanfics for so long. I'm thinking of making a sequal.

Hetalia: Not mine
*updated~!Bunny Emoji-42 (Awww) [V2]  *
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Meowhug17 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student Filmographer
Poor Japan XD
KiddoKunsGirl Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
This was good. Not really what I was expecting but good! ^^
Ray711 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was surprised when Holy Rome Germany kissed reader-chan, Japan didn't burst in saying:
ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
*looks Ray711 in the eye* They aren't the same person.
Ray711 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*looks ButterscotchRipple77 in the eye*
They have to be!
Miss-Fluff-Queen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Actually there is a rumour that the original creator of Hetalia explained in a convention in Japan that Germany is infact, the Holy Roman Empire. This could be just a rumour, since not many people know this but- It was in Japan and most people here don't know Japanese. If it is true, you are correct about HRE being Germany. Plus most people agree with you.
Ray711 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know. In history, the Holy Roman Empire disbanded to make Germany, and other countries places.
TheLPSDragon Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Heheh... I ship my OC Ireland with Germany now XD
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
said Japan, completely(or should I say, compretery) uncomfortable
PnkCookie Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
Hold Uuuup!! HRE is Germany......:iconareyouseriousplz: nu-uh 
elinaboycheva Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yes he is! 
hetalian15627 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
What do you mean~? [EXO] Tao Emoticon 
XxxAnnaXSasukexxX Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
OMG! I was not expecting the last part!! >///<
VulpesVulpini4 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Winnie the Pooh was all I can think of after I finished the song ><)))•>
hetalian15627 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
Yuuta Togashi (Shy Blush) [V1] I'm just glad you like it.
Magicthekiller Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can tell you'll take care of Germany :iconyepplz:
hetalian15627 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
You got that right. *smirks*
Magicthekiller Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yep 😋
WolfLover0925 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Awe... Lol can I still come visit Doitsu-Chan?
hetalian15627 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Writer
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